1 - A car has crashed off the side of a lonely country road in the middle of the night. The trunk is open, as are the driver and passenger doors. No one is visible. A line of trees is visible in the background.
NO COPY
2 - Within the forest, there are signs that a number of people have hastily moved through this area - broken branches, muddy tracks, and evidence of slipping and tripping. Once again, no one is visible.
NO COPY
3 - On an open briefcase sitting on the ground, overflowing with money. Some of it is in the mud, other bills have mud on them. There is a handcuff link around the briefcase's handle, the chain leading off-panel.
NO COPY
4 - On the opposite handcuff link, which is around a man's wrist (also lying in the mud). Not much more than the hand and wrist are visible, but it's clear the man is wearing a suit and that he has taken some injuries (cuts and bruises, etc).
NO COPY
5 - Reveal. The man who is handcuffed to the suitcase of money is lying dead in a forest. The cuts and bruises on the hand were just the beginning, as this guy was in sorry shape, but it's not exactly clear what the cause of death was. Two crooks, both wearing rumpled suits (with evidence of mud on their knees, elbows, and the like from the chase), stand on either side of the dead man, staring down at his body. Their expressions are somewhere between neutral and shocked.
NO COPY
6 - Repeat panel. The crooks look up and lock eyes with each other, angry. The yell and gesticulate at each other. They speak the same words to each other.
BOTH: This is all your fault!
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