Wednesday, October 14, 2015

InkTober - Page 6

1 - Close-up of the bell above the door ringing as the door closes behind it.

SFX: bada-ling!

SARAH (off-panel): God...

2 - Establishing shot of Pan's interior.  It's a huge room, with shelves and tables and storage space everywhere, and nearly every single surface looks to be piled with stuff.  Whether it's mementoes, knick knacks, more practical items, or whatever else you can think of, it's pretty much there.  Also worth noting would be that there's doorways and stairs all about leading to other parts of the store.  They don't have to all be on the panel, but the focus should be on how big the place is.  Serena and Greg are somewhat dwarfed by its size.

SARAH: Why can't Pan's be more of a Pawn-Mart?

3 - Sarah turns to Greg to ask him a question; Greg looks jazzed that she would even consider his opinion.

SARAH: What do you know about systems of organization?

GREG: Dewey Decimal or Library of Congress?

4 - Exasperated, Sarah walks away from Greg, not even bothering to look at him.  Greg wilts in disappointment.

SARAH: Never mind.

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