1 - Superman lies on the ground, beaten and bloodied. He looks bad. In the foreground, the feet of General Zod stand before him.
ZOD (off-panel) (1): Will you not stop already?
ZOD (off-panel) (2): What aspects of the human race are worth sacrificing your own life for?
2 - Zod delivers a swift kick to Superman, literally kicking him when he's down. Superman doesn't look good. LETTERING NOTE: If possible, please have the third word balloon of this panel appear after the kick.
ZOD (1): Their great capacity for fear?
ZOD (2): Hatred?
ZOD (3): Violence?
3 - Superman is down and it doesn't look like he's getting up. Zod walks away, a smirk on his face.
ZOD (1): Any animal will exhibit these behaviours.
ZOD (2): Humanity is a pestilence, wallowing in their own filth while they slowly destroy the pristine planet they so readily take for granted.
4 - Close on Superman. He manages to look up, his face all bruised and cut.
SUPERMAN (quietly): You're wrong.
5 - Close on Zod, surprised / annoyed.
ZOD: Excuse me?
6 - Zod is walking back, Superman is trying to get up.
SUPERMAN (1): Humanity is more than that.
SUPERMAN (2): They are overwhelming kindness.
SUPERMAN (3): Fierce loyalty.
SUPERMAN (4): Beautiful love.
7 - Zod is back. Impatient and incredulous, he looks down at Superman, who is maybe up to his hands and knees.
SUPERMAN: And most of all...
8 - Superman is up and he is punching the shit out of General Zod. It's a KO-type thing.
SUPERMAN: They are a refusal to ever give up.
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