Saturday, October 10, 2015

InkTober - Page 2

1 - Close on Sarah's face.  She's surprised as someone calls to her from off-panel.

GREG (off-panel): Sarah!

2 - Sarah, ready and in a crouching position, looks down the street where the ghost of a stereotypical 1950s businessman floats.  He's kinda blueish, maybe glowing a bit, and waving eagerly, as if seeing an old friend.  Sarah facepalms.  If there's space, maybe show the minotaurs coming through the window.

SARAH (quietly): Ugh, I do not need this right now.

GREG: Hi, Sarah!

3 - A minotaur jumps from the window sill and slams into the ground (kind of a full body splash) where Sarah was crouching.  Thankfully for her, she dives out of the way just in time.  Greg floats closer in the background.

GREG: Did you know there are anywhere between 1.3 and 1.5 billion cows in the world?

SARAH: Little busy, Greg.

4 - Over the shoulder shot of the two other minotaurs advancing on Sarah, who is shaking a pendant from her necklace as if it isn't working.  Perhaps have it starting to glow purple (or some colour) from the base up, as if turning on.

SARAH (quietly): Come on, come on!

SFX (from pendant): vzzt!


5 - Sarah throws a roundhouse kick that is augmented by the power of the pendant, sending a ripple of force outward, taking the minotaurs off their feet and sending them flying.  Both the pendant and the force glow a bright purple.


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