1 - The next morning. Outdoor view of the apartment building. Robert's voice comes from within.
ROBERT (from within): Alright...
2 - In Chris' apartment. Chris is looking at a bunch of objects laid out on her couch (not yet visible), while Robert is walking in, looking down at a notebook that he's writing away in.
ROBERT (1): It's a new day and people are going to want to know what's next.
ROBERT (2): It's still too cold to grow anything, but we should keep tending the gardens in case that changes.
ROBERT (3): Which leaves us with the usual options:
3 - On Chris' couch. A whole bunch of items related to survival are laid out, along with a big back pack to put them all in.
LETTERING NOTE: Robert's dialogue should be placed throughout the page to match to particular items. "Raiding" is next to a road flare and a small knife, "looting" is next to some tools and a flashlight, "and scavenging" is next to some food (not a lot), and "Wait--" is next to the back pack.
ROBERT (off-panel) (1): raiding,
ROBERT (off-panel) (2): looting,
ROBERT (off-panel) (3): and scavenging.
ROBERT (off-panel) (4): Wait--
4 - Back on Robert, who has looked up from his notebook and hasn't (or doesn't want to) put together what he's seeing.
ROBERT: What are you doing?
5 - Chris is walking out of the room with the packed bag on her back, already past Robert. She wears a look of determination, while Robert just kind of turns to watch her trajectory but does not yet move to follow.
CHRIS: I'm leaving.
Next page.
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