Thursday, December 24, 2015

Doomcember - Shred - Page 24

1 - Walking through a slightly less destroyed street, Chris and Robert come upon what's left of an apartment building entrance. The trail of smoke from last page rises in the background.

CHRIS: Here we are

2 - Chris starts to rip down / move the rotting boards that block the entrance. Robert looks on, sceptical.

ROBERT: Your sister lives here?

3 - Chris pauses in her board moving to turn and glare at Chris. Chris looks contrite.

ROBERT: Why don't I wait outside?

4 - Chris walks through the apartment foyer, which is just as desolate and abandoned as the entrance.


5 - Walking up the stairs, Chris pauses to cough.

CHRIS: hargk! hargk!

6 - Chris walks down a ratty hallway, detritus littering the floors and the like, towards a closed door at the end of the hall.


7 - On the closed door.


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