Friday, November 6, 2015

Noirvember - If on a Winter's Night - Page 6

1 - Simon stands outside of the doorway of the alley behind the bar holding a garbage bag.  This is an alley that we've seen before.  Simon looks cold and unhappy.  The snow continues to fall in the night.

NO COPY

2 - Simon looks with frustration at the dented and knocked over garbage can, which is covered in a good deal of snow.

NO COPY

3 - Simon has put down the garbage bag and is picking up the garbage can.  His frustration is gone, replaced by curiosity at something that has caught his attention off-panel.

NO COPY

4 - Focus on a stack of twenty dollar bills laying in the snow.  It's partially covered by the downfall, but is still clearly visible.

NO COPY

Onto page 7.

Start from the beginning.

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