Friday, November 20, 2015

Noirvember - If on a Winter's Night - Page 20

1 - Amy tugs at Piotr's arm to try to placate him.  As Piotr is significantly taller than Amy, focus on Amy's face and Piotr's huge arm, with Piotr's face off-panel.

AMY: Come on, Piotr, I'll make your favorite.

2 - On Piotr's face, still glaring angerly.


3 - Piotr turns to look at Amy, his expression softening.  Amy looks back in relief.

PIOTR: Okay.

4 - Piotr sits down as Amy walks off towards the bar.  Simon looks relieved.

SIMON: ...So, if you don't mind me asking, what brings you by so late?

PIOTR: Me?  Am meeting couple of friends after a job.

5 - On Amy at the bar, pouring some vodka into a glass.  She looks up to see a figure outside the door, knocking.

AMY: Looks like we have one now.

SFX: bang! bang!

Onto page 21.

Start from the beginning.

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