Monday, November 16, 2015

Noirvember - If on a Winter's Night - Page 16

1 - Amy stands outside the backdoor of that familiar alley.  She is smoking.  While still dented, the garbage can now sits next to the door, upright and with the garbage bag inside of it (instead of splayed across the ground as they had been previously).


2 - Close on Amy as she finishes the cigarette / flicks it away.


3 - Amy looks directly at the garbage can, a look of puzzlement as she registers its different position from where she last left it.


4 - Similar to panel 3, but Amy looks back towards the door as Simon calls for her, distracted from her garbage-related thoughts.

SIMON (from within) (1): Amy?

SIMON (from within) (2): Things may be getting worse in here!

Onto page 17.

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