1 - Back outside in the alley, focused on the spot where Winston's body has been - except the body's not there. Snow's still falling, but something of an imprint of where he was is still visible, along with a pool of blood, and perhaps the dented garbage can and forgotten garbage bag.
NO COPY
2 - Simon and Amy are standing at the backdoor from the bar, looking in confusion towards the empty space.
NO COPY
3 - Winston charges from the opposite direction, spearing Simon with a brutal tackle (possibly taking Simon off his feet). Simon does not see it coming at all and is crumpled. Amy flips out in the background.
WINSTON: ARRGH!
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