Sunday, November 1, 2015

Noirvember - If on a Winter's Night - Page 1

1 - Establishing shot.  We're looking at a city at night in winter.  A river runs through the city, taking up a good portion of the panel's real estate (maybe we got a bridge spanning it).  Lights from buildings, cars, and sign blaze against the darkness.  It's snowing.

NO COPY

2 - A man, Winston, walks across the bridge, a duffle bag on his shoulder and a hand held to his side.  No other pedestrians are around.  There's maybe a car or two, but they obviously drive on without stopping.

NO COPY

3 - Winston reaches the edge of the bridge, slouching against a streetlamp pole as he waits for the light to change to cross the intersection.  His hand remains on his side.

NO COPY

4 - Winston walks along the sidewalk in a small neighbourhood.  We're definitely not downtown, but there are a lot of storefronts at street level - often with apartments and the like above.  We're late enough in the evening that there's only a few businesses open and not too many people are out and about.  His hand remains on his side.

NO COPY

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