1 - On Piotr as he holds a gun similar to Winston's, drawn and aimed in Simon's direction.
NO COPY
2 - On Simon's face. His eyes are tightly shut. He grimaces. Perhaps he turns his head slightly, as if turning away could help. Maybe even a tear streaming down his face if that isn't too much.
NO COPY
3 - On Piotr's gun, the trigger being pulled.
SFX: clik!
4 - On Simon. He flinches like crazy, putting up his arms in a useless act of self-defense.
LETTERING NOTE: I'd love it if there could be a big BLAM! covering pretty much the whole panel, with Simon standing in front of it, to illustrate the sound, violence, and so forth of the gun shot.
SFX: BLAM!
Onto page 28.
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