Thursday, November 26, 2015

Noirvember - If on a Winter's Night - Page 26

1 - Close on Simon's eyes, narrowing in determination / anger.


2 - Close on the gun, specifically the trigger, as Simon pulls it back.  A small clik! emerges.

SFX: clik!

3 - On Simon and Piotr.  Simon looks very worried as he continues to pull the trigger to no result.  Piotr is also surprised, but he doesn't let it show too much.
LETTERING NOTE: Have the three clik!s stacked vertically, if you would.

SFX: clik!  clik!  clik!

4 - Simon turns the gun on its side and looks at it, as if seeing it for the first time.  Piotr looks impressed / surprised.

PIOTR: I am impressed you pulled trigger.

5 - Piotr reaches into his jacket, presumably grabbing his own weapon.

PIOTR: I am sorry for your sake it did not work.

Onto page 27.

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