1 - Simon stands with the gun raise and pointed at Pitor and Joseph, both of whom have their hands up. Simon should look awkward as heck - this is not a natural position for him. Joseph is surprised, but Piotr's expression is neutral and patient.
SIMON: Amy, get over here.
2 - Amy comes around the bar and walks past Simon, tugging at his arm to continue with him. He resists, remaining in the position of holding up Piotr and Joseph.
AMY: You're right, let's go.
SIMON: Not without the money.
3 - Amy and Simon get into an argument, causing Simon to turn his attention to look towards Amy.
AMY: What? We need to leave!
SIMON: Pick. Up. The. Money.
PIOTR (off-panel): You should listen to Amaliya.
4 - Simon turns his attention back to Piotr, who has walked closer while Simon was looking elsewhere. Simon straightens his arms and points the gun right at Piotr's chest.
SIMON: You should shut up and back off. I'm the one with the gun.
5 - Piotr moves forward so the gun is touching his chest, looming tall over Simon's small and quivering figure.
PIOTR: Da. But you are without guts to use it.
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