1 - Close on Simon's still tightly shut eyes.
NO COPY
2 - His eyes open slightly.
NO COPY
3 - His eyes are looking down, surprised at what they see.
NO COPY
4 - Pull back to reveal Simon looking down at his completely unhurt self. He can't quite process what he's seeing.
AMY (off-panel): Simon...
5 - On Amy, who has been shot in the stomach. She bleeds freely, one hand on the wound and the other held up so she can look at all the blood covering it. She is in shock.
NO COPY
6 - Amy loses consciousness, falling towards the floor. Simon races over towards her.
SIMON: Amy!
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