1 - We're back at the bar, set up like we were on page 4, except Amy is sitting and drinking while Simon is behind the bar. Amy has a mostly done drink in her hand and a few empty drinks next to that. Simon looks uncomfortable. He also has a drink, but it is untouched. The duffle bag remains on the bartop.
NO COPY
2 - Close on the bar top. Simon's hand reaches for Amy's.
SIMON (off-panel): Aims...
3 - Amy pulls back her hand and points the other accusingly towards Simon.
AMY: Don't.
4 - Amy is furious; Simon is penitent. Neither says a word.
NO COPY
5 - Amy gets off the bar stool and walks towards the back.
AMY: You know what? I need a smoke.
6 - Back on Simon, who looks ashamed as heck.
AMY (off-panel): Try not to make things any worse while I'm outside.
Onto page 16.
Start from the beginning.
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