Start from the beginning.
1 - Belok stands at the doorway to Lady Ashling's manor / castle, a big hopeful smile on his face. Ashling stands at the door, complete disappointment on hers.
ASHLING: You've got to be kidding me.
2 - Ashling closes the door, but Belok puts his body between the door and the jamb so that it cannot be closed (this does not look comfortable).
BELOK: Just give me one second to explain!
3 - Ashling relents, a hand to her face in frustration.
ASHLING (1): *sigh*
ASHLING (2): Okay.
4 - Belok sheepishly tries to explain the situation. Ashling raises a doubtful eyebrow, unimpressed.
BELOK: I left something here before things...ended between us, and I really need to get it back.
ASHLING: Seriously? That's your explanation?
5 - Belok puts on a serious expression. Perhaps focus on him, dropping the background to emphasize the supposed drama of the moment.
BELOK: The very fate of the world may hang in the balance.
6 - Ashling's face sours even more, reaching once more for the door.
ASHLING: That's what you said every time you snuck off to bang Wilhelmina the Wild!
7 - Belok looks hopeful, as if what he's saying will be the piece of logic to convince Ashling. She is stunned at his stupidity.
BELOK: But this time it's true!
8 - Ashling stares, incredulous. Belok does not see a problem here.
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9 - The door slams in Belok's face. This is the indication he needs to finally realize the conversation has not been going well.
SFX: SLAM!
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