Monday, November 18, 2019

Noirvember - Window of Opportunity

1 - Night time. Maddi and Victor stand at the backdoor of a house. Victor is about to try to kick it open, but Maddi puts a hand on one of his arms to stop him. She's looking down, having seen something.

MADDI: Hold up

2 - Maddi leans down and lifts the welcome mat from the backdoor. There's a spare key beneath, but it'll be the focus of the next panel so it's alright if it doesn't get a lot of attention here.

MADDI: You gotta think smarter, not harder.

3 - Victor is now down and has picked up the key. Maddi is (mostly) off-panel, a crashing sound effect coming from her direction.

VICTOR: Good point. I didn't even think to look for a spare key.

SFX: krssh!

4 - Switch to reveal that Maddi has used the mat to break a window without getting hurt and is now using it to clear out the remaining broken glass.

MADDI: A spare what?

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