Friday, November 22, 2019

Noirvember - One Man's Trash

1 - A man stands on a bridge overlooking a river in a city. It's late at night. No one else is around. He holds some jewelry / general valuables that he's in the process of putting into a bag on the halfway on the side of the bridge.

MAN: {sigh}

2 - The bag filled and closed, the man gives it a little toss of the side of the bridge. He looks sad about it.

MAN: I'll be back for you.

3 - Far out shot with a little splash below to indicate the bag hitting the water. The man is walking away from the bridge, although how visible he is in this silhouetted view is up for debate.

MAN: I swear.

4 - Back on the man, walking down the street away, getting further away from the bridge. In the near distance, some cop cars are driving his way.

NO COPY

5 - The cars have stopped and cops are out with the guns raised. The man holds his hands up, surrendering.

MAN: Evening, officers. What can I do for you?

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