Monday, November 11, 2019

Noirvember - Breadcrumbs

1 - A young man is running through the forest at night. He wears pants, but is shirtless and shoeless. He runs with reckless abandon, looking behind him in fear as he goes. There's significant brush that he's going through.

NO COPY

2 - The young man trips and is going down hard. A cell phone comes out of his pocket as he's tumbling.

NO COPY

3 - The young man lands with a thud, knocking the wind out of him. Maybe have the panel focus on his cell phone, so he's a bit off-centre.

YOUNG MAN: oof!

SFX: thud!

4 - Closer on the cell phone. The young man is getting up and heading off, still looking back in fear.

NO COPY

5 - On the cell phone, but it's day time. A shadow looms over the phone / a hand reaches down to pick it up.

BADDIE (off-panel): Now what do we have here?

6 - Pull out to show a group of three or so bad guys who are wearing some hunting gear / camo and totting some guns. The one shows the cell phone to the others; they all smile cruelly.

BADDIE: He can't have gotten far.

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