Wednesday, November 20, 2019

Noirvember - Bug-Out Bag

1 - Chuck, a mid-fifties guy crashes through an apartment door he's shouldered open.

SFX: krrrrak!

2 - Chuck starts to pull himself back up to his feet. The place is a mess - there's money and drugs and stuff on the coffee table and the floor, clothing is strewn all about, and it's general chaos. The window at the back of the room is open, letting in snow.

CHUCK: Shit.

3 - Chuck is looking around, his phone out and to his ear. The "camera" moves towards the open window (so Chuck is not the focus).

CHUCK: The kid bolted.

4 - Looking out the window. A young woman is running across the street below. She holds a hastily filled duffle bag and does not have the proper clothing for the winter weather (maybe mismatching shoes / boots?).

CHUCK (off-panel): Dunno where she could have gotten to.

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