Thursday, November 7, 2019

Noirvember - Anonymous Donation

1 - Establishing shot of a living room the morning after what looks like a pretty rowdy party. Iris and Kent are passed out, Iris on the floor, Kent on the couch. The place is a mess - the coffee table is flipped over, food and empty drinks litter the floor and every surface, the TV might be broken, the drapes are ripped, etc - you get the idea. Iris is in the process of waking up, a hand rubbing heavily at her eyes.

NO COPY

2 - Iris is up and walking through the room, still kind of out of it. She picks up the bottle that Kent passed out holding.

NO COPY

3 - Iris takes a sip and surveys the damages.

IRIS (quietly): Dang. We did we do last night?

4 - A cooler sits in the foreground, the focus of the panel. In the background, Iris sees it, looking confused.

NO COPY

5 - Iris has opened the cooler and looks inside, the confusion on her face morphing to worry.

IRIS: Kent...

6 - Top down angle to show there is a kidney on ice inside this cooler. Iris turns around to try to get Kent's attention.

IRIS: What did we do last night?

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