Wednesday, November 13, 2019

Noirvember - Leap of Faith

1 - A young man races across an apartment rooftop, looking behind as he runs. Maybe some pursuers are visible in the background.

NO COPY

2 - The young man keeps running, stumbling a little as he tries to avoid a clothesline. His eyes are wide at something up ahead.

NO COPY

3 - Switch to what's up ahead: the end of the rooftop and the big gap between this rooftop and the next one.

NO COPY

4 - The young man takes off in a leap to make it to the next rooftop. Frame to see both sides of the gap.

NO COPY

5 - Repeat panel. The young man is no longer visible.

NO COPY

6 - Focus on the roof edge the young man leaped from. Two figures - the pursuers - look over the edge and downwards. The first figure looks nonplussed, maybe a little disappointed, whereas the second figure looks ill at what they see.

FIRST FIGURE: What a shame.

7 - The first figure has turned and is walking away. The second figure looks towards them, a little surprised at how quickly they've moved on.

FIRST FIGURE: He's not going to be in any condition to talk now.

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