Saturday, November 16, 2019

Noirvember - new phone who dis?

1 - Daytime. Winter. Tanya sits in her car, a puffy winter jacket and gloves to keep her warm. Her attention is grabbed when her phone dings.

SFX: ding!

2 - On the console in between the front seats. Tanya has opened it and rummages through, but it's mostly filled with CDs. The cupholder has a mostly drank coffee.

SFX: ding!

3 - From inside the glove compartment, looking out at Tanya's confused / frustrated face as she continues to search for her phone. A handgun is plainly visible amidst the papers and documents within.

SFX: ding!

4 - Tanya sits in her car, confused as to where her phone is. It continues to go off.

SFX: ding!

5 - Tanya's face lights up and she digs through her inside jacket pocket.

SFX: ding!

6 - Tanya looking at her phone. She's confused / incredulous at what she sees. She's removed one glove so as to be able to use the touch screen.

SFX: ding!

7 - Tanya is getting out of the car, sliding the gun from panel 3 in the back of her waistband.

NO COPY

8 - Back inside the car, looking at the phone she's left on the passenger seat. It's on the text screen. The contact is named "Boss Baby" and the texts are as follows:
food to go
food to go
FOOD TO GO
ducking autocorrect
...
let's rob this place

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