Sunday, November 17, 2019

Noirvember - Dog Days

1 - Close-up of some blades of grass with dew still on it. It's early morning in the summer.

WALKER (tailless): Lasagna!

2 - Pull back to see a golden lab straining at his leash to get into some deep and prickly bushes. There's clearly something within that has his attention.

WALKER: No!

3 - Switch to the lab's walker, a young woman in sweats and an old shirt. She's clearly only partly awake for this early morning stroll and is trying to restrain her dog from going deeper into the bush. The leash is taut.

WALKER: We have to keep going!

4 - The lab is losing ground, but leaping and pulling at the leash.

WALKER: My yoga class won't take itself!

5 - The woman has the lab by his collar and drags him away.

WALKER: I know you just want to roll in some dead thing.

6 - Move the focus to inside the bush. A recently dead body is lying on the ground, the source of the dog's interest.

WALKER (off-panel): Not this time, mister.

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