Sunday, November 3, 2019

Noirvember - DIY

1 - Night time. Keith walks from his car in his driveway to his home. He holds a duffle bag at his side. Maybe he looks around to make sure no one sees him at this time of night. Keith wears a tuque and jacket, his clothing overall nondescript.

NO COPY

2 - Keith walks down the stairs into his unfinished basement, still holding the duffle bag. On his workbench is a bag of concrete, a bucket of water, a builder's shovel, some gloves, a tarp, and the like. A shovel leans against the work bench.

NO COPY

3 - Keith shovels / pours some concrete mix onto the tarp. He's removed his jacket (but not his tuque).

NO COPY

4 - Keith pours water into the concrete.

NO COPY

5 - Keith mixes the concrete and water together with the shovel. He's no longer wearing pants. His phone buzzes on the workbench.

SFX (PHONE): bzz! bzz!

6 - Keith answers the phone. He realizes he's still wearing the tuque (looking up towards it, maybe reaching for it with his other hand).

KEITH (1): Hello?

KEITH (2): Nah, I couldn't sleep.

7 - Top down view of Keith on the phone, his tarp of cement, and a before unseen hole / space in the concrete floor. The duffle bag, Keith's clothes, and some guns lie in the space. Keith throws the tuque (revealed as an until now rolled up balaclava) into the space with the rest of the stuff.

KEITH: Had some work in the basement that couldn't wait.

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