Friday, November 18, 2016

Noirvember - Lost and Found - Page 5

Start from the beginning.

1 - Vanessa and Troy are walking out of the woods onto a parking lot-type thing.  There is a single car in the parking lot (theirs).  A cop car is driving by along the connecting rural road.  Vanessa sees the car and tries to get its attention.


2 - Long shot of Vanessa and Troy running down the road after the cop car.  Its brake lights flare.


TROY: Stop!

3 - Repeat the long shot.  Vanessa and Troy have caught up with the cop car and stand beside the driverside window.

VANESSA: Out in the woods! We saw--!

4 - Close on Vanessa and Troy.  They both look terrified and sick.  The cop car roof is visible, but not the interior.

VOICE (from within cop car): The woods?

5 - On the cop car driverside window.  The bad dude from earlier is sitting in the front seat, wearing a cop uniform.  He leans on the (lowered) window, a jovial expression on his face, although whether it's from being in a good mood or recognizing Vanessa and Troy is unclear.  This panel could be done so as to leave space for title credits and the like, if desired.

BAD DUDE: ...what did you see?

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