Start from the beginning.
1 - Randall and Charles are sitting on the curb near the restaurant. Randall has one hand in his inside jacket pocket, reaching for something; he holds a mostly eaten piece of bread with his other hand. Charles looks attentively.
NO COPY
2 - Randall pulls out another piece of bread. Charles looks disappointed, if not surprised.
NO COPY
3 - Randall cautiously offers the bread to Charles. Charles hangs his head in disappointment, not looking at Randall.
NO COPY
4 - Charles puts out his hand to accept the bread, although he continues to hang his head.
CHARLES: You don't have the money you owe, do you?
5 - On the sign to Chez Edgar. Neither Randall nor Charles are visible.
RANDALL (off-panel): Not as such, no.
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