Start from the beginning.
1 - Close on Kendra's hand as she brings it out of her bag. She's holding a couple of small smoke bombs.
KENDRA: It's clear that I've overstayed my welcome.
2 - Kendra throws the smoke bombs at the floor, immediately unleashing growing smoke. The luchadors may recoil slightly.
KENDRA: So--
SFX: smokebomb!
3 - Outside. It's still raining. The bus' interior is filling with smoke, most of the back already obscured.
NO COPY
4 - Kendra crashes through one of the bus windows (with her bag, of course), diving to the street below.
SFX: krsssh!
CAPTION (KENDRA): Well.
5 - Kendra lies on the wet road. The bus is off-panel.
CAPTION (KENDRA): The day was longer than I would have liked.
6 - Kendra gets up, taking a moment to dust herself off. A crash comes from the direction the bus left the panel.
SFX: CRASH!
CAPTION (KENDRA): And the weather's still awful.
7 - Kendra starts walking home.
CAPTION (KENDRA): But at least I'm a little closer to home.
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