Start from the beginning.
1 - On Randall as he gets puts his hands up in an attempt to placate Charles.
RANDALL (1): Okay, I get it.
RANDALL (2): You can keep watch out here.
2 - Randall is up the stairs at the doorway on the second level, a gun drawn. He looks down at Charles, who is rolling his eyes and munching on the bread.
RANDALL: But I'll get the bigger share.
3 - Randall kicks in the door. In the background, Charles searches through his coat.
NO COPY
4 - Randall is inside and out of view. Charles has pulled out a phone that he is talking on as he walks out of the alley.
CHARLES: Hello, 911?
5 - Shot of the neighbourhood. Maybe we're jumping forward in time as some cop cars race towards Chez Edgar.
CAPTION (CHARLES): I'd like to report a robbery.
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