Wednesday, October 4, 2017

InkTober - For King and Country - Page 4

Previous page.

As discussed, we're working from Simon Fletcher's InkTober prompts, specifically the first four of the Steampunk list - The Wicked Cyborg, The Airship Captain, The King of England, and The Explorer Girl.

Page 4

1 - Close on the window from which Rose and Cornelius entered the compartment. It remains open.

ROSE (off-panel): Did you close the window?

2 - Close on Cornelius. As much as a robot's head can, he looks awkward and uncomfortable. Note that he is still straddling the captain, who could be in view on-panel (although that is hardly necessary).

CORNELIUS: Why do you ask?

3 - Close on Rose. She looks quite cross and frustrated. Maybe she's faceplaming a little.

ROSE: ...

4 - Establishing shot of the luxury airship, flying far above the water below. We're out at a substantial distance, but the tiny figure of King George falling towards the water is clearly visible.

CORNELIUS (from within): Okay, so we've had better vacations...

Fin.

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