1 - Night time. Establishing shot of an independently owned electronics store. The storefront reads iComputer in a dated font and style from the early 2000s. A low glow can be seen in the windows from the computers on inside.
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2 - Interior. A little aisle of tables with some laptops / tablets / computers on top, leads to a door with a handwritten sign that reads "DON'T CLOSE ME!". Note that some of the computers seem to be missing from the tables, with open spots and cords leading to nothing. These computers (and others off-panel) are giving off that low light from panel 1 and maybe some shadows of people?
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3 - Mark, a young employee, sits on a box inside a small room, looking at his phone which has a "no signal" on the screen. Maybe his eyes look slightly to the side, ask if registering the sfx at the bottom of the panel. The door is next to him.
SFX: shfffshfffshfff
4 - Mark is off his box and banging on the door, desperate.
MARK (1): Hey! I'm stuck in here! Let me out!
MARK (2): Heeeey!
5 - The door bursts open, knocking Mark back into the box and a shelf. The handwritten sign can be seen on the door.
SFX: crsh!
MARK: oof!
6 - Two burglars with masks stand in the doorway, one pointing a gun at Mark. If it can fit, maybe show a bag with some of the computers in it. Mark is shocked.
MARK (quietly): shit
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