Start from the beginning.
1 - Terence's hands are all cut up and bloody from smashing the counter - he holds them up, stunned. Now it's the owner's turn to be mad as hell, throwing his arms out in disbelief.
TERENCE (quiet): oh shit...
OWNER (1): What the fuck!
OWNER (2): I pay you assholes to prevent this kinda shit!
2 - The owner points to the door, stone-faced.
OWNER: Get. Out.
TERENCE: Not without the money.
3 - The owner comes around and is getting in Terence's face. Maybe some intense pointing / prodding with his finger. Terence does not look impressed.
OWNER (1): Are you kidding? I ain't giving you shit.
OWNER (2): When the regular guy comes 'round, I'll pay him.
4 - On one of Terence's bloody fists. There's still blood and possibly some glass in it, but he makes a tight fist. Maybe have some veins bulging in his arm.
OWNER (off-panel): ...And I'll be sure to let him know all about what a fuck-up you are.
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